What if they had unified the musical grammar more within a single track and fleshed out the narrative multidimensionally across several tracks? The sudden sound variation in the middle wasn't convincing. Because I really liked the lyrics, I subconsciously end up seeking ways this narrative could have been brought to life better. Above all, the melody is great.
I think the MV is cute and the atmosphere is nice!
Personally, I liked the playground part(?). But as I listened to the part where the mood suddenly changes right after the playground section ended,
I wondered, "Is this a song about making a mistake..?"
To be honest, I liked the middle part, but I was caught off guard when the song's vibe suddenly shifted. Still, everything else was really good, so I enjoyed listening to it!